I suppose copy editing is never done

And that no one really reads commit messages.

Drafts/privacy-blimp-launched-from-deck-of-tolkien.org

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 The CloudFleet Blimps offers an alternative for current consumers of
 cloud services.  By using a Blimp, individuals may choose to stop
-being the product of so-called "free" servives, and pay for the
-benefits of an openly intergrated alternative.
+being the product of so-called "free" services, by supporting for an
+openly integrated alternative.
 
 ** Data Autonomy
 
+Embodying the principals of data autonomy, the users of the Blimp are
+assured that they are in full control.
+
+One may learn more about the Data Autonomy manifesto at
+<https://discourse.cloudfleet.io#data-autonomy>
+
 ** Crowdfunding
 
+Our crowdfunding campaign offers a variety of perks which include
+hardware shipping in late April 2016.
+