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<mailto:press@cloudfleet.io> <mailto:press@cloudfleet.io>
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CloudFleet launches privacy blimp from ship in Hamburg CloudFleet launches privacy blimp from ship in Hamburg
CloudFleet headquarters in Vienna today announced from the successful * Byline
launch of a new consumer privacy service from the decks of the CloudFleet HQ. (Vienna/AT)
J.R. Tolkien in Hamburg, DE, last month. Attempting to answer the
question of "What is to be done?" after the Snowden revelations of
2013 and onwards, the Blimp offers provable security as a consumer product.
Your data; your device: your Cloud! ** Am Sandtorkai
CloudFleet launched a new consumer privacy service from the decks of
the J.R. Tolkien in Hamburg/DE. Helping to answer the question of
"What is to be done?" after the Snowden revelations of 2013 and
onwards, the Blimp offers openly provable security as a consumer
product. Pledges to the crowdfunding
"We're actually doing this, huh?" wondered one of the Fellowship from "We're actually doing this, huh?" wondered one of the Fellowship from
the deck of the J.R. Tolkien berthed Am Sandtorkai. the deck of the J.R. Tolkien berthed Am Sandtorkai.
** Your data; your device: your Cloud!
The CloudFleet Blimps offers an alternative for current consumers of
cloud services. By using a Blimp, individuals may choose to stop
being the product of so-called "free" servives, and pay for the
benefits of an openly intergrated alternative.
** Data Autonomy
** Crowdfunding
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